Don’t over-describe things. Part of the enjoyment of stories is building your own picture from the clues the author provides. One interesting bit of detail is worth far more than ten bland ones.D’Lacey, C. (2019). Top writing tips. [online] the Guardian. Available at: https://www.theguardian.com/childrens-books-site/2016/jun/01/top-writing-tips [Accessed 15 Dec. 2019].